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Storytelling – It’s NOT All About the Words

Pop quiz:

Question one: What’s this?

Question two: What’s this?

 

The moral of the story? It’s not all about the words.

You know what the top picture is, what it means, where you might encounter it, and what to do with it. The second picture is a lot less meaningful, and yet what is it lacking,

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Why Corporate Publishing is so Much Better Than Self-Publishing

I just finished reading a book that was quite appallingly bad.

There are so many ways in which this book stinks that it’s difficult to know where to begin, so I’ll just jump in.

Dated research. There were so many

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Mini-Rant o’ the Day: “Couple”

In some uses, you can use couple without of:

They are a couple.
It is a retreat for couples.

In others, you cannot:

I will list a couple of examples here.
She has a couple of books in her house.

Here’s the key: replace couple with pair, and see if you need of:

They are a pair.

NOT: They are a pair of.

It

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The Importance of Diction

As all three of my regular readers know, I have a list of what I call “the basic tools of the writer.” These are (in no particular order) spelling, punctuation, diction, syntax, and grammar. I periodically get emails about one or another of this list, typically doing one of two things: either telling me what

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Online Feedback: Part II

I’ve said this before, and now I’m going to say it again.
Maybe not so nicely this time.

When your friend approaches you with a manuscript, hot off the printer and dripping ink, and your friend says to you “Hey, you! (says your friend to you) Tell me what you think of the choices I’ve (that

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Re “re”

The word “re” is not an abbreviation.

Nor is it an acronym or an initialization. It is simply a Latin word. Originally, it was almost invariably used in the phrase “in re,” meaning “in regard to.” From Wikipedia:

In re, Latin for "in the matter [of]", is a legal term used to indicate that a

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The First Rule of Drafting

Reposted from an article I wrote on www.webook.com.
He’s studied the Rules extensively, not so that he’ll know what to do and what not to do, but so that he’ll know what to do openly and what to sneak around at.

–The Bumbler’s Apprentice, Other Loves

“The Rules of Drafting,” the teacher writes across the

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I May Stop Using He/She/It

The Search for a Universal Pronoun May Have Found Its Own Beginning

I have to say that it has bothered me for some time that people use “they” as a singular pronoun. But it has bothered me even more that it’s so easy to do.

My newest dictionary, The New Oxford American Dictionary, 2nd Ed, (2005) says:

Sentences

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Silly Grammar Check! Rules are for Biological Lifeforms!

If you let the machine tell you how to write, you are going to write like a machine.

Let me begin this by saying that I don’t use the automated grammar check in my writing software. As a matter of fact, I don’t think it has one, but I had occasion to open a file from

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